Is the
value of telling the truth, be decent, modest, reasonable, fair or honest. From
a philosophical point of view is a human quality that is to act according as it
thinks and feels. Since we are little our parents or in the school teach us
different kind of values but the most important is the honesty, why? The tell
us that if you want to be a better or a successful person you have to be honest
always, but to tell the truth is always correct and possible? Maybe sometimes we think that this is
impossible or a few people can be honest in their entire life.
Sometimes a
person that is special for you, maybe a friend, your family, a teacher, a neighbor,
etc. ask you something about his appearance and you have to be delicate about
your answer, you don´t want to hurt them, and you say a “white lie”. We think
that in that moment is good to tell a little lie.
In other
times is good to be honest maybe in a project, a person tell you any idea, and
you think that is bad, so you have to tell them that you can do another thing,
maybe if you do that the project will be
perfect and everyone can shine in their abilities.
I think
that you have to be honest because if that person is special for you, is not
correct that you say a “white lie” in
this way you hurt them anyway but they don´t know them, if you say the truth both
can be better.

Your introduction was great, so the development of the essay, but you could go deeper and speak your mind in the conclussion.
ResponderBorrarYour ideas were well organized so as the essay structure. The use of vocabulary was good enough and the picture gave a special touch to the writing.
Well done!